Hey Anna, This poem is so caring, I loved the describing words you used it was very thought through. Next time maybe use google docs instead of google slides because there was only one slide. Franky(:
Hello,I'm Shanika from Awahono School, You probably know me from commenting on your blog! I really like how you used more interesting words instead of basic words, and how you thought about how much you care about your mum. Maybe you should do it on google drawing because you're only using one slide.
Hello it is Chloe-Rose from Awahono school, I like you poem how you have a little bit of pink and a little bit of white . maybe next time you could do it on a google drawing or doc. HERE IS A LINK TO MY BLOG, https://paparoarangechloem.blogspot.com/
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Hey Anna,
ReplyDeleteThis poem is so caring, I loved the describing words you used it was very thought through. Next time maybe use google docs instead of google slides because there was only one slide.
Franky(:
Hello Brooke!
ReplyDeleteI'm pleased you enjoyed my Mother's Day Poem. To answer your question, my mother really enjoyed it! Thank you for your kind words.
Kind regards,
Anna from New Brighton Catholic School
Hello,I'm Shanika from Awahono School, You probably know me from commenting on your blog! I really like how you used more interesting words instead of basic words, and how you thought about how much you care about your mum. Maybe you should do it on google drawing because you're only using one slide.
ReplyDeleteHello it is Chloe-Rose from Awahono school, I like you poem how you have a little bit of pink and a little bit of white . maybe next time you could do it on a google drawing or doc. HERE IS A LINK TO MY BLOG, https://paparoarangechloem.blogspot.com/
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