A couple of months ago, Room 1 was luckily gifted a surfing lesson by The Duke Festival. I made this slideshow about surfing and I really hope you enjoy it! Please remember to leave a comment.
Hi Anna, I really like your surfing slideshow, you added a lot of description into your work which was really helpful. Did you enjoy the surfing trip ?
Hi Anna im Isla from Rawhiti school, I really liked this piece of writing you ave done it is really descriptive. Make sure you check the spelling before and after posting. Did you enjoy the surfing trip with your class.
Hi Anna, I really enjoyed your surf slideshow. I liked the way you explained every step of surfing and it was all really clear to read.And you had a lot of information about Duke and what he was good at. Next time you could maybe put some photos of you guys surfing.
Hi Anna good Job I enjoined the part when you talked about the duke festal.. I learnt that the duke was originally form America.I noticed that you missed out a few full stops in your slide but it was really good and I loved learning about Duke and where he came from.Do you like surfing?
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Hi Anna,
ReplyDeleteI really like your surfing slideshow, you added a lot of description into your work which was really helpful. Did you enjoy the surfing trip ?
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ReplyDeletei think it was so amazing and I loved it but ma maybe just one more slide and a bit more seance in the one but otherwise it was amazing loved it!!!
ReplyDeleteGood job Anna I really like it I think it had lots of information. Did you like the surfing trip?
ReplyDeleteHi Anna im Isla from Rawhiti school,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this piece of writing you ave done it is really descriptive.
Make sure you check the spelling before and after posting.
Did you enjoy the surfing trip with your class.
Hi Anna, I really enjoyed your surf slideshow. I liked the way you explained every step of surfing and it was all really clear to read.And you had a lot of information about Duke and what he was good at. Next time you could maybe put some photos of you guys surfing.
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Hi Anna good Job I enjoined the part when you talked about the duke festal.. I learnt that the duke was originally form America.I noticed that you missed out a few full stops in your slide but it was really good and I loved learning about Duke and where he came from.Do you like surfing?
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